Great work. I am super pleased that this is your original work, and that you are using your own words to describe the instructions.
Often I find instructions easier to read when someone or myself has reworded it to make it more straight forward. Also the “What you’ll need” I think is the most important part of instructions, so great detail on this!
I am wondering, did you use a different material of paper or cardboard for the final step? Because I’m amazed that the weight of the books was held by just A4 paper!
It's a real shame, I had assumed this had been re-done as your original work but it's been pointed out to me that the pictures have been taken from a website. We really want to see your own work for the activities. For now I'll be logging this as plagiarised work that won't receive points.
Kia ora Joanna,
ReplyDeleteGreat work. I am super pleased that this is your original work, and that you are using your own words to describe the instructions.
Often I find instructions easier to read when someone or myself has reworded it to make it more straight forward. Also the “What you’ll need” I think is the most important part of instructions, so great detail on this!
I am wondering, did you use a different material of paper or cardboard for the final step? Because I’m amazed that the weight of the books was held by just A4 paper!
Great work, your amazing effort shows!
Mā te wā,
Benjamin.
Hi Benjamin,
ReplyDeleteThank you for the comment, yes for the final step I used a little thicker paper. it kook trial and error to get it to work and hold the weight.
Kia ora Joanna,
ReplyDeleteIt's a real shame, I had assumed this had been re-done as your original work but it's been pointed out to me that the pictures have been taken from a website. We really want to see your own work for the activities. For now I'll be logging this as plagiarised work that won't receive points.
Ngā mihi,
Benjamin