That is a cool snowball poem as I can see that you added at least one word longer to every new line in your poem. This shows that you have developed an understanding of the snowball poem. I like all the things that you associated with the summertime within your poem such as going to the beach and building sandcastles. It sounds like a lot of fun and I hope you have had time to enjoy those activities this summertime. I also loved building huge sandcastles with my brothers during the summertime.
Did you enjoy this activity? Do you have any tips from fellow bloggers for making a snowball poem? I think it could actually be a lot of fun to make a snowball poem with someone and see how many lines you can get to as you have to add at least one new word to each line.
I’m looking forward to seeing your next blog post!!!
Kia ora Joanna Phil here from the Poetry Slam team. Thanks for sharing your awesome poem. Your poem gives me a really good insight into what makes summer special for you. Did you find it tricky making each line the right number of words? I know I did! Don't forget to enter your poem into the slam using this form. Then you can head to this site to check out some other students' poems and leave them some comments. Keep up the amazing mahi!
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That is a cool snowball poem as I can see that you added at least one word longer to every new line in your poem. This shows that you have developed an understanding of the snowball poem. I like all the things that you associated with the summertime within your poem such as going to the beach and building sandcastles. It sounds like a lot of fun and I hope you have had time to enjoy those activities this summertime. I also loved building huge sandcastles with my brothers during the summertime.
Did you enjoy this activity? Do you have any tips from fellow bloggers for making a snowball poem? I think it could actually be a lot of fun to make a snowball poem with someone and see how many lines you can get to as you have to add at least one new word to each line.
I’m looking forward to seeing your next blog post!!!
Remember to have an Awesome Summer !!!
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Kia ora Joanna Phil here from the Poetry Slam team. Thanks for sharing your awesome poem. Your poem gives me a really good insight into what makes summer special for you. Did you find it tricky making each line the right number of words? I know I did! Don't forget to enter your poem into the slam using this form. Then you can head to this site to check out some other students' poems and leave them some comments. Keep up the amazing mahi!
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